why not post it? Idk how it compares to the other things I've written but...
ahhh who cares enjoy :}
Silence surrounds you and your friends,
your stomping ground looks as though it will never end,
silver linings trace your very shape...
The bit of hope is in your face,
the sun is just there to light up your place,
but like your counterpart your time is limited...
I know that your presence is a gift,
so I live in your moment til it quits,
hanging on to that moment and its take...
I remember you like the world is wrong with out you,
as I think of the world, my memory always has a place for you,
blinking once you are gone and one still feels that you are apart of it....
Why'd you have to go?
-Hazey
your stomping ground looks as though it will never end,
silver linings trace your very shape...
The bit of hope is in your face,
the sun is just there to light up your place,
but like your counterpart your time is limited...
I know that your presence is a gift,
so I live in your moment til it quits,
hanging on to that moment and its take...
I remember you like the world is wrong with out you,
as I think of the world, my memory always has a place for you,
blinking once you are gone and one still feels that you are apart of it....
Why'd you have to go?
-Hazey
2 comments:
"I remember you like the world is wrong without you..." This line brought me to tears. Though it may not have been about them, it makes me think of all who were lost in the Haitian earthquake.
It's nice to see you channeling your feelings into poetry again. I hope it brings you some peace.
thanks i wasn't sure if anybody would actually like it...:]
speaking of Haiti I donated 5 dollars I just hope it gets there you know?
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